1. GREAT beginning! I love the use of the screen. Simply silhouetted dance moves are truly beautiful.

2. Beautiful costume. Full body stocking was a great idea. It makes us think you’re naked, but you’re actually not! One piece of constructive criticism, though, if you really want this piece to go places I suggest real leaves rather than faux.

3. Who is the choroegrapher and how can I get in touch with her/him? Just kidding, Marty, I know you choreographed this. It’s great. It really is. I’m sure Mort Guffman would love it as well. Except as we all know he often doesn’t feel like showing up to shows which he promised to attend.

4. Another thing about the choreography,when you do a sort of pike jump, I believe The Dude did that in a dream once. How’s that for a compliment, eh?

5. Marty, did you know that you’re a YouTube celebrity? You’re a real one too because not only are you on there, but there are about twenty videos of other people doing your moves.

6. Great music choice.

7. Love the “cycle” theme.

8. I know there weren’t very many people in the audience and three of them were busy talking about Branded and burgers, but don’t worry man. You’ll catch your break. I was enraptured by your performance.

9. That about sums it up. Wonderful. I can’t wait to see what the future holds for your dance/choreogrpahy career.